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2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families．In order to make surely all of us are in good health，and she makes specific plans for us．For example，every morning，my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple．My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples．I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things，we may become ill．But he insists on us eating healthy food．Understanding her good intentions，I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation．
【考點(diǎn)】健康．
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