假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Our school held a show called "Us After Ten Years"，when the speakers presented their future careers.I chose to be the diplomat（外交官）.I'd like to present myself as a true spokesperson，either gentle like Wang Wenbin nor sharp like Zhao Lijian.Waiting my turn，I paced backstage with my heart beating wildly.Then comes my turn.I took a deep breath and walked onto the stage，waved to jye.ai.audience.The bright lights and screams were surrounded me tightly.Fortunate，everything went smoothly.The heavy burden changed into a sense of pride.I'm proud of me and Chinese diplomats，who meet challenge every day but manage to keep showing Chinese wisdom.
【考點(diǎn)】未來規(guī)劃；創(chuàng)新與創(chuàng)業(yè)．
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