假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：
1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

    The other day our school carry out a survey about how the youth would choose between careers and families.Here is the result.There is around 26 percent of the surveyed students assumed that the youth should focus their attention on careers with the aim of living independently and achieving their goals.Therefore，about a third of the students hold a different view.They think that in spite the importance of one's enterprise，the company and warm of families are the most crucial things in the world.The rest of the students support the opinion which there should be a properly balance.In the summary，I argue that not only should we work hard，but we are supposing to devote some time to our family members.