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Sun Yang is known for a famous Chinese swimmer． Born in 1991， he is 1.98 meters in height and 89 kilos in weight． As swimmer， he always trains hardly． That's why he could win two gold medal in the 2012 London Olympics， which were a great honor for our country． Although he once makes mistakes in the view of the public， but in the 2013 World Swimming Championships he made amazed achievements． Sun Yang is very brilliant that he has many fans． We should be pleased to take her as our role model．
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