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Yesterday on my way home，I witnessed a accident.A girl fell off her bike，who head was bleeding heavy.Many people crowded around her.To help the girl，and someone advised moving her to the roadside in the shade.I disagreed and insisted that the girl was left where she was until doctors came.She seemed not breathe at that time.I immediately started his breathing using mouth-to-mouth way.Then I covered her wound with a clean piece of cloth and applying pressure to the wound to slow down bleeding.About ten minute later，the doctors arrived and the girl were sent to hospital.
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We were walking down the main street to go across to Downtown Disney when John，the younger of my two nephews，（1）walking.He stood there for a few seconds with his eyes looking across the（2）.As I started to walk towards him to tell him to（3）so we could stay with the group，he started walking across the street.
I was just standing there thinking and trying to（4）what he would do.（5）he got to the other side of the street，he stopped in front of a couple and their crying child.If I had to guess，this kid was probably around the same（6）as John，if not a little bit younger.
I saw them talking to each other for a moment，and then John（7）his balloon that he had just got within 10 minutes to the kid.The parents looked absolutely（8）.The kid took the balloon，stopped（9），smiled at John and said something to him.
Then John came walking back over to me，totally（10）.The parents were still watching him as if he was a miracle.And the kid was smiling and talking（11）to his parents，pointing at my nephew.By the time he got back over to me，I was obviously confused.So I asked him， "What was that about？"
John answered calmly， "He looked sad.He shouldn't be（12）at Disneyland，so I gave him my（13）to make him happy."
Then I asked， "You gave him your balloon？"
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