假定你校英文報(bào)在征文，話題是：家庭和外界哪一個(gè)對(duì)孩子的成長(zhǎng)影響更大？請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：
（1）表明你的觀點(diǎn)；（2）闡述所持觀點(diǎn)的理由。
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【考點(diǎn)】提綱作文．

【答案】Though family has a great effect on children's life，it is the outside-of-home factors that play a bigger part in their development.
To start with，in terms of intellectual development，teachers，who are professionally educated and experienced in teaching，play a more important role than parents，as they can help the children acquire knowledge and develop necessary skills more effectively.In addition，social skills and cooperative skills，which are significant in children's future development，can also be better cultivated through communication with peers or participation in various activities rather than the interaction with parents.
To conclude，when it comes to the role in influencing children，I strongly believe outside-of-home factors make greater contributions to the overall growth of children than family.